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''Reporting - Ready and looking Badass.'' by Nenefi ''Reporting - Ready and looking Badass.'' by Nenefi
Commission done for :iconasiakudelska:

Took: Approx. 7hrs
It turned out better then it should have. xD
'Hope you like it!

Character (C) :iconasiakudelska:
Artwork (C) me

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:iconxxxmakixxx:
Vision: 4 / 5 Represents a Solider (or a recruit). The scar in her eye proves that she has fought hard before. Her expression shows determination to fight and defend her country. If i have to say something bad is that normaly fingers are never in the trigger (unless in combat).
Originality: An Original character is used. The military theme is still not common in mlp drawings. The weapon i think is a G36E, if I am not wrong and it would have been a little more "original" if it were a weapon of your own. Lacks of background (probabliy was not incluyed in the commission).
Technique: Proportions (head - arms - body - weapon) are ok. Your coloring is very good (I like specially the colors chosen for the hair), the shadowing is also correct and her hair's brightness is fine. Her uniform is very realistic, with an apropiate color and with bents. In the other hand, her weapon is not so good drawn, her ammo clip is a bit distorted. although in the overall the weapon is ok.
Impact- As I said before, I like her expression, and her composition. Looks like a warrior about to join in combat untill the end.

The best:
- Coloring
- Shadowing
- Proportions
- Expression. She looks badass!
- Details
- Uniform
- Hair
- Background color (the simple grey highlights the figure and dont't distract)

To improve:
- A bit more history background (tell the story behind the image, a badge in her uniform that tells in wich army she is...)
- A bit the weapon.
What do you think?
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3 out of 3 deviants thought this was fair.

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:iconlainkaulait:
Lainkaulait Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017
TRIGGER CONTROL REE
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:iconxxxmakixxx:
xxxMakixxx Featured By Owner May 15, 2016
At ease, soldier!
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:iconcannoncar:
CannonCar Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHOA! I love it! Thank you so much! :D :heart:
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:iconnenefi:
Nenefi Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Student General Artist
You're welcome ^^
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:iconcannoncar:
CannonCar Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
may repost it here and also put it to facebook? (I will credit you on both) :D
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:iconnenefi:
Nenefi Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Student General Artist
I'm fine with that, thank you :3
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:iconcannoncar:
CannonCar Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay .w.
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:iconcannoncar:
CannonCar Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, I reblogged it on my Tumblr too. :D
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